Oh wow, thank you! FIRST ATTEMPT AT VILLANELLE = SUCCESS, I feel! And, ahem, I wouldn't worry about missing out on deep references to Disney canon, as I haven't seen the film since I was about nine (much as I loved it then!). It probably has more Andersen in on the whole - though if by some faint chance you haven't read that version, I would advise not looking for it: ARGH.

Which mixes together with Disney to result in, as you pick out, fury for poor salaried Ariel!