YOU FIXED IT SO FAST I THOUGHT I HAD HALLUCINATED IT.
You've nailed the tone and then some. But man, man, man, I just love how you leave so many things hinted and unsaid in the way of real primary documents -- like how Zuko and Azula are "the children of the second prince" at the beginning. And the euphemism for Zuko's death being "given to the fire." And the way that the report about Azula comes direct to Mai.
Man. It's fucking fantastic. Every time I think about Zuko's teenage love poetry being saved for posterity, I just giggle.
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Date: 2010-09-21 05:53 pm (UTC)You've nailed the tone and then some. But man, man, man, I just love how you leave so many things hinted and unsaid in the way of real primary documents -- like how Zuko and Azula are "the children of the second prince" at the beginning. And the euphemism for Zuko's death being "given to the fire." And the way that the report about Azula comes direct to Mai.
Man. It's fucking fantastic. Every time I think about Zuko's teenage love poetry being saved for posterity, I just giggle.